I was bored and decided to draw some "Airships" related art.
I hope it turned out all right.
What do you think?
Commander, Engineering Corps
To be honest, I cant really see the shape of it. It could use more defination around the edges of surfaces rarther than just the shading you've done.
Do you see the wings at least?
Also, how do i make it more defined without turning it into a cartoon?
Just use thicker lines around edges. the shading really confuses the shape of it. the wings look like their swept foward?
Well, the wings are the thing at the back that could easily be confused for a random downward facing fin.
K, i edited it. How does it look now?
Is this the general shape of the plane, or is it facing a different angle?
Yep, that looks about right.
Though the back bit is actually an open engine with a metal panel protecting the exhaust.
That ship actually kinda makes sense now that you've cleaned it up. You could still clean it up even more though.
It reminds me of Ridley's ship from Metroid: Zero Mission, assuming I'm seeing it correctly
Clean enough? I can't clean it up any more. I have already taken away too much sketch.
Yeah, that's a bit better. I also think the shading could be done better to make the overall shape clearer.
...unless you just intend for this to be a sketch.
I am only capable of doing sketches sadly.
Every time i try something else i fail miserably.
I can shade it, but that combined with the normal gritty drawing style just becomes a mess. And then we are at square one.
It might work if color it...